{"id":234,"date":"2013-01-29T14:12:00","date_gmt":"2013-01-29T14:12:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/pelicanbookgroup.com\/blog\/blog\/2013\/01\/29\/tactical-tuesdays-advice-for-self-2\/"},"modified":"2015-11-25T12:22:18","modified_gmt":"2015-11-25T19:22:18","slug":"tactical-tuesdays-advice-for-self-2","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/pelicanbookgroup.com\/blog\/tactical-tuesdays-advice-for-self-2\/","title":{"rendered":"Tactical Tuesdays: Advice for Self-Editing"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><\/p>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpFirst\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-indent: 0.5in;\">\nRecently, authors have asked me<br \/>\nseveral questions regarding chapters. What is a good word count for a scene?<br \/>\nHow many scenes should make up a chapter? When is a chapter considered too<br \/>\nlong? <\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-indent: 0.5in;\">\nI suspect that the authors who<br \/>\nasked these questions wanted simple answers, but the truth is, the answer lies<br \/>\nwithin the story itself.<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-indent: 0.5in;\">\nIf you are writing a thriller,<br \/>\nthe readers will expect quick, rapid-fire action. The author may want to make<br \/>\nhis scenes smaller and to place all of the events occurring within a certain<br \/>\ntime frame within one chapter. Several quick scenes equal a larger chapter.<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-indent: 0.5in;\">\nIn formulaic romance, a guideline<br \/>\nto use would be to give the hero and heroine each a scene in the chapter.<br \/>\nNotice, however, that I very carefully used the word <i>guideline<\/i> rather than rule. Some factors within a romance might<br \/>\nmake it necessary for a scene to have one or maybe even three or four scenes.<br \/>\nImagine a scene between the hero and heroine where the conflict is very<br \/>\nintense. The scene is probably going to be a little longer than usual, and since<br \/>\nthe hero and heroine are together and the scene should be powerful enough to<br \/>\ncarry itself, then the one scene will do. Suppose your hero and heroine are in<br \/>\ndifferent places at the same time. In that case, the two scenes per chapter guideline<br \/>\nmight apply. But let\u2019s throw in romantic suspense. What happens when the<br \/>\nvillain comes into play? If he needs a scene, one of two things might occur: 1)<br \/>\nthe villain may have a scene within the chapter or 2) the villain\u2019s scene might<br \/>\nbe used as a chapter in itself to add emphasis to his or her villainy.<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpLast\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-indent: 0.5in;\">\nAnother matter to consider with<br \/>\nregard to the length of a scene or a chapter is actually psychological. If an<br \/>\nauthor has written a riveting scene, the length doesn\u2019t matter. However, let<br \/>\nthat scene drag, even the least bit, and the author will lose his audience. A few issues to consider when working on scene and<br \/>\nchapter structure are:<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst\" style=\"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.75in; text-indent: -0.25in;\">\n1.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<br \/>\nDoes<br \/>\neach scene and chapter have a satisfying beginning, middle, and ending?<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.75in; text-indent: -0.25in;\">\n2.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<br \/>\nIs<br \/>\neach word used in the scene or chapter necessary?<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.75in; text-indent: -0.25in;\">\n3.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<br \/>\nDoes<br \/>\na particular scene need emphasis for the reader? In other words, does it need<br \/>\nto stand out? If so, make that scene a chapter in itself.<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoListParagraphCxSpLast\" style=\"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.75in; text-indent: -0.25in;\">\n4.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<br \/>\nDoes<br \/>\neach scene move the story forward? In order to determine this, an author must<br \/>\nlook at each scene as a building block in his masterpiece. Every scene must lock<br \/>\nthe one before it in place. Likewise, each chapter must lock the previous<br \/>\nchapter in place. No meandering allowed.<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpFirst\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-indent: 0.5in;\">\nSo when self-editing, work hard<br \/>\nto eliminate anything that is not necessary to the story as a whole. This will help you craft tighter scenes and riveting chapters. Remember to write each scene so<br \/>\nthat the reader is left wanting more.<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; text-indent: 0.5in;\">\nHappy editing.<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Recently, authors have asked me several questions regarding chapters. What is a good word count for a scene? How many scenes should make up a chapter? When is a chapter considered too long? 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