{"id":111,"date":"2014-06-10T17:05:00","date_gmt":"2014-06-10T17:05:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/pelicanbookgroup.com\/blog\/blog\/2014\/06\/10\/tactical-tuesday-advice-for-self-editing_10\/"},"modified":"2015-11-25T12:22:16","modified_gmt":"2015-11-25T19:22:16","slug":"tactical-tuesday-advice-for-self-editing_10","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/pelicanbookgroup.com\/blog\/tactical-tuesday-advice-for-self-editing_10\/","title":{"rendered":"Tactical Tuesday: Advice for Self-Editing"},"content":{"rendered":"<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpFirst\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0.0001pt;\">\nThe word <i>characterization <\/i>is tossed around quite a bit in a writer\u2019s world,<br \/>\nbut what does it really mean?<\/p>\n<p>Characterization is what makes a<br \/>\ncharacter who he is. An author draws upon several aspects to develop a<br \/>\ncharacter:<\/p><\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0.0001pt;\">\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0.0001pt;\">\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; text-indent: -0.25in;\">\n\u2022&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<br \/>\nFamily background: A kid raised in the slums of<br \/>\nNew York is definitely going to behave differently than a kid who grew up on a<br \/>\nfarm in Oklahoma.<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; text-indent: -0.25in;\">\n\u2022&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<br \/>\nEducation: Someone with a fifth grade education<br \/>\nisn\u2019t going to see the world through the same eyes as someone schooled at Harvard. I\u2019m not saying that the person with the fifth-grade education isn\u2019t<br \/>\nsmarter than the Harvard grad because often times, common sense shows a higher<br \/>\nintelligence than \u201cbook learning.\u201d<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; text-indent: -0.25in;\">\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; text-indent: -0.25in;\">\n\u2022&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<br \/>\nMoral values: We&#8217;re not talking exclusively Christian values, although the ones who know Christ should have a pretty high moral standard. Overall, though, moral values can be good or bad. They are derived through childhood or through rebellion. They are what makes a person appear good or evil. They are also what provides depth to character&#8211;even when a character doesn&#8217;t practice what he knows is right<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; text-indent: -0.25in;\">\n.\u2022&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<br \/>\nBack story: Yes, back story is always important<br \/>\nto characterization. However, not all back story is relevant to the story at<br \/>\nhand except that it builds character. Only what is relevant to the story should<br \/>\nbe brought in, the rest should be a tool for development of character.<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; text-indent: -0.25in;\">\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; text-indent: -0.25in;\">\n\u2022&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<br \/>\nConflict: How a person deals with conflict shows<br \/>\nthe reader that character\u2019s strengths and weaknesses.<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; text-indent: -0.25in;\">\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; text-indent: -0.25in;\">\n\u2022&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<br \/>\nRepetitive actions, speech attributes, and<br \/>\nmannerisms are a great way to develops a character.<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; text-indent: -0.25in;\">\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; text-indent: -0.25in;\">\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0.0001pt;\">\nTherefore, it only goes to prove that three<br \/>\ndimensional characters are created when:<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0.0001pt;\">\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; text-indent: -0.25in;\">\n\u2022&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<br \/>\nThey are given a unique pattern of behavior<br \/>\nbrought on by their background, education, and values.<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; text-indent: -0.25in;\">\n\u2022&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<br \/>\nThey are placed in situations that are not<br \/>\ncomfortable for them and then react in ways they normally would not behave.<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; text-indent: -0.25in;\">\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpMiddle\" style=\"margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; text-indent: -0.25in;\">\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpLast\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0.0001pt;\">\nA few modern-day characters exhibit a depth of characterization. Let\u2019s dissect one of the most popular<br \/>\ntelevision characters for today\u2019s audiences:&nbsp;<br \/>\nDr. Sheldon Cooper from <i>The Big<br \/>\nBang Theory.<\/i><\/div>\n<ul type=\"disc\">\n<li class=\"MsoNormal\">Family background: Sheldon\u2019s father was an alcoholic;<br \/>\n     his mother is portrayed loosely as a Christian. Sheldon has a twin sister,<br \/>\n     who does not have his high intellect, but both his mother and his sister<br \/>\n     exhibit far more common sense than does Sheldon.<\/li>\n<li class=\"MsoNormal\">Education: Sheldon is a highly educated genius, but he<br \/>\n     lacks social skills.<\/li>\n<li class=\"MsoNormal\">Moral Values: Like it or not, Sheldon does exhibit the<br \/>\n     moral values instilled upon him by both his mother and his beloved<br \/>\n     \u201cMemaw,\u201d yet his scientific exploration has him doubting the God his<br \/>\n     mother worships.<\/li>\n<li class=\"MsoNormal\">Back story: Sheldon was a childhood genius who was<br \/>\n     often picked upon. His genius propelled him through school and is most<br \/>\n     likely the reason for his social ineptness.<\/li>\n<li class=\"MsoNormal\">Conflict: Sheldon is a very me-centered individual.<br \/>\n     He\u2019s also OCD, and he behaves in very funny ways when his comfort zone is<br \/>\n     invaded. He also, on occasion, shows compassion and a child-like persona,<br \/>\n     which adds depth.<\/li>\n<li class=\"MsoNormal\">Repetitive actions: Sheldon has created words such as<br \/>\n     \u201cBazinga,\u201d and he has made the saying, \u201cI\u2019m not crazy. My mother had me<br \/>\n     tested,\u201d very popular. His OCD has him always knocking on Penny&#8217;s door<br \/>\n     three times while calling out her name. Sheldon also insists that no one<br \/>\n     sit in his spot, and when someone brings him food, he has a lists of<br \/>\n     questions to ask about it. These all draw the audience to his unique<br \/>\n     character.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<div class=\"MsoNormalCxSpLast\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0.0001pt;\">\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0.0001pt;\">\nCharacterization is important to a novel. It is the fleshing out of our<br \/>\nnovel\u2019s cast members. When self-editing, an author should review his manuscript<br \/>\nwith an eye toward characters who live in an ordinary world yet who make that<br \/>\nworld extraordinary by the things they see, the conflict they face, and the way<br \/>\nthey see the world around them.<\/div>\n<div class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"margin-bottom: 0.0001pt;\">\n<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>The word characterization is tossed around quite a bit in a writer\u2019s world, but what does it really mean? Characterization is what makes a character who he is. An author draws upon several aspects to develop a character: \u2022&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Family background: A kid raised in the slums of New York is definitely going to behave [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":3,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_et_pb_use_builder":"","_et_pb_old_content":"","_et_gb_content_width":"","footnotes":""},"categories":[504],"tags":[79,80,81,82,67,21,70],"class_list":["post-111","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-editing-writing-advice","tag-back-story","tag-characterization","tag-characters","tag-conflict","tag-editing","tag-editing-advice","tag-self-editing"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/pelicanbookgroup.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/111","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/pelicanbookgroup.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/pelicanbookgroup.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pelicanbookgroup.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/3"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pelicanbookgroup.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=111"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/pelicanbookgroup.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/111\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/pelicanbookgroup.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=111"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pelicanbookgroup.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=111"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pelicanbookgroup.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=111"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}